I'll start with the structure of my contents page. I split the list of contents that would be in the magazine into the 'REGULARS' and 'OUT OF THIS WORLD' as the one of articles than the original where it was just listed which looks terrible compared to final cut. Along with adding a 'MONTHLY CONTRIBUTORS' section as well. Another major difference with the structure of photo placement and the addition of photos, along with better and clearer images. I decided with the two models as the popstars to show the double power of women in the music industry.
Another change there is, the use of a better font as the font used on the rough cut didn't have the opportunity to lower case. Along with having the key words in red such as my front cover on a certain story to keep it effective and have the house style flowing through the magazine. As well having it back to black instead of the pink and purple as it looks awful with the blue.
I also changed the page colour with it being blue to white as it looks much better with the black and red wording making it easier to read than struggling with similar shade of purple with the blue background.
The parts what I kept the same is the title font of the page, and the shade of pink but I defined the shape and placing of the pink bars which came from the underline of the page title. This was to make the sections easier to define.
Overall I believe this my weakest page but I'm satisfied on how this page has turned out.

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